Tyler Mills (TM): When I was working on the poems of Tongue Lyre, I was interested in the interaction between the mythic story—what is “outside” the poem—and the lyric material of the poems themselves, which are inspired by a love of language (such as sound, metaphor, citation, visible texture, and connotative meaning). I remember wanting to resist the idea that there would be an immediate one-to-one correspondence between what the myth already brings to the poem and each poem’s individual lyric arc. Allegories really become dynamic when one thread, the prior story, unwinds from the second thread, the materials of the imagination. What keeps bringing me back to writing poems that are, as you said, “moments of combined self-reflection and myth” (a phrase I love) is this dynamism, the tension between that unresolved space between both things: self-reflection (or, imagination, to draw from Stevens) and myth.
KZ: So perhaps then, you began these poems with play? Whether it is playing with language or finding play in myths? Your poem “Circe’s Notes” is rich with both elements. I want to read the form (the conceit of note-taking) as subverting the Homeric narrative that domesticated and disenfranchised Circe. I also want to read your play with language as aligning cliché and myth, and re-appropriating them both to reveal a cannibalistic masculinity. Is your poem a palinode in Hilda Doolittle’s or Anne Carson’s sense?
TM: I do begin my poems with play, perhaps in the sense of playing a musical instrument. I like to think of the way a poem begins similarly to the way I think of the start of a good practice session when I’m practicing the violin. If I know I want to work on something in a particular key, I’ll just have fun playing around in scales and chords in that key so I’m ready to work on the piece. Perhaps in this analogy, the myth functions as the possibilities within a score (Levi-Strauss compared myth to a musical score). Language itself is the delight I find in meditating on words, experience, and memory in order to open up the possibility within a prior text or narrative.
“Circe’s Notes” certainly began with this kind of play—as creative and destructive force. It begins, “Socrates decided to be executed. / And the execution of art?” (30). I kept thinking of how Circe typically functions as a symbol of power—she transformed Odysseus’s men into pigs—and then of the function of symbols in general:
In a public garden, a tree
wears a skirt
of hard green apples
with a white crescent bite
out of each skin (30).
One could say that I collected this image from my life. Once, I found myself in a city park, where I noticed a tree that seemed to promise the most delicious apples. They looked full and sweet. However, I quickly realized that many people had also been tricked: the grass was covered with discarded apples, each with one bitter bite ripped out. I could see the teeth marks; it was almost like the moment of realization—of the bitterness within the ripe appearance—was marked in each one. Of course, I couldn’t help but think of an allusion to the Tree of Knowledge in the Garden of Eden. But I also kept thinking about the image as a concept, as image itself. How are appearances deceptive? What is a symbol? In the case of “Circe’s Notes,” the image of the apples came to me as I prepared myself to work with the prior text of the Circe myth. I suppose I found this particular image to be one of the essential notes (as in musical note, though it does pun with the poem’s title) that I could play with in the goal of working with the myth.
However, I’d like to say that how I begin isn’t always like this, so tidy to explain. In reality, much of the time, I am not sure where the materials of the poem come from, other than from that well of internal quiet where the most vulnerable and raw part of the self can be found (or, more like, glimpsed). And, the material also comes from reading as many different kinds of texts as I can, and being open to what they can teach me.
Your question about the palinode is an interesting one. A conservative reading of the definition from the Princeton Encyclopedia of Poetics would lead me to think that the answer is no, my poem is not a palinode, because my poem does not explicitly retract a prior statement about Circe or another statement made about her. But I’d like to look at the way H.D. and Anne Carson both investigate Stesichoros’s palinode for Helen of Troy, which absolves her of the blame of the war. I’d like to quote Carson’s translation of Stesichoros’s fragment (from Autobiography of Red):
No it is not the true story.
No you never went on the benched ships.
No you never came to the towers of Troy (17).
What interests me about Carson’s treatment of the palinode is that the recantation, in its negation, seems to even more fully realize the fictional narrative than had the statement been issued as that of a truth. In saying Helen is a fiction—that she “never went on the benched ships”—the speaker appears to fortify the assumed falsehood with the kind of believability that can only come from a place of inalienable truth. Perhaps this is what the rhetorical gesture of the palinode is supposed to achieve.
What interests me about H.D.’s treatment of the palinode is how Helen functions as a figure, if she is retracted. In the prose passage before the second section of “Palinode” in Helen of Egypt, Helen of Troy is said to be “a phantom, substituted for the real Helen, by jealous deities,” the result being that “[t]he Greeks and Trojans alike fought for an illusion” (174). For H. D., the palinode instantiates a duality between memory and forgetting. Also, the prose section before the second part of “Palinode,” reads “But Helen, mysteriously transported to Egypt, does not want to forget. She is both phantom and reality” (175). I suppose, if one looks at Tongue Lyre as a whole, one could say that the figure of Philomela functions this way, as a figure that is “both phantom and reality,” as she does and does not forget the violence.
The critic Allen Grossman has said that the mythic archetype of the song of Philomela emerges from the bird pressing her throat against a thorn; the thorn at the throat is a way back to that glimmer of memory that the song marks, the cause of the violence that she forgets. In other words, the song, the lyric, is caused by violence, yet it itself exists out of forgetting the violence. Memory is willed. In my poems, what is retracted? Is it this forgetting? Tongue Lyre ends with an insistence on memory. But is it redemptive? Or is it another kind of entrapment? I’m not sure I have the answer to these questions.
But to return to “Circe’s Notes,” inasmuch as the poem interacts with the myth as a kind of prior story, or prior text (what we might think of when we hear an allusion to Circe), I suppose one could say that it could function as a palinode: the Circe of “Circe’s Notes” chooses symbol as a choice—so that the transformation of men into swine, or the “cannibalistic masculinity,” as you so adeptly put it, becomes a symbol of something entirely different. It absolves Circe from the cultural blame of taking a power assumed to be male; perhaps she even dismantles what this assumption about power might even symbolize.
KZ: I very much like the idea that “ Circe’s Notes” is not a palinode, yet accomplishes the work of one. As I read it, the end of the poem exemplifies a sense of play so powerful that it can transform cliché; the cliché that “men are pigs,” which the poem conflates with myth and ergo transforms. The facts of Circe’s story are not recanted, but they are given new insight. Made new, if you can stand to be in contact with Pound’s phrase. The emotional tenor of your poem’s end:
O my potbellied pig,
I’ll eat you.
And when I cook pig,
one pig cries and cries
for another pig (30).
Such a mix of empathy and justice. The poem’s line breaks become more severe, as the intensity of emotion escalates. Circe as she was, not dependent on masculinity for any power. And clever in the way most poets envy. I read this as the payoff to all your well-wrought images. Contradictory signs clash and meld. The bitter apple tree, the quarter glued to the floor that fools people who try to pry it up. Socrates, who preferred death over exile, works as a foil character to Circe, who found power in herself and outside centralized power structures.
I think “Circe’s Notes” is the counterpoint to your book’s book-endings of Philomela’s myth, by which I mean it expresses a moment of contrast, contradistinction, the ugly note that makes the sweet note that much sweeter. Or, the other way round.
Perhaps part of the story you take into mind when thinking about myths is that of Anne Carson and H.D.? And I do not mean to imply imitation on your part in the least. Yet both are such muscular women writers: I feel daunted and envious when I read either. You mentioned The Autobiography of Red, as well as, Helen in Egypt, both of which are canonical in anybody’s reading-list worth anything, and which I did introduce to the conversation. Before we return to Philomela, I have a two-part question: in what way and which writers have influenced you? And, in what ways and which musicians and composers have influenced your writing or your own musicianship? Is one stronger than the other?
TM: The idea of “influence” makes me think of Lethem’s“Ecstasy of Influence” essay from Harper’s a while back. Sometimes influence calls to mind the idea of citation, though I find that backtracking through my thought process can quickly become impossible. When I think about the question of influence, I always think about the rotating stacks of books next to my bed (right now there is Ashbery’s Houseboat Days, Carson’s Nox, and Lerner’s Leaving Atocha Station). I pick them up and read them until my eyes begin closing and I turn the light off. I think about phrases I remember from conversation or the radio, or random magazines (Vogue, usually) I bought three months ago and should have thrown away by now, but I find myself looking at. These texts enter my brain: what do they do there?
When I was writing the poems of Tongue Lyre, I was deeply influenced by Joyce’sUlysses. “The heaventree of stars hung with humid nightblue fruit.” I wanted to make language do that. I wanted to try thinking about how a mythic subtext could allow a field of language to enact an emotion (in poetry) rather than a narrative—though I am often interested in subverting narrative in my work. I wanted, and needed, to work through the material of these poems, and I found that Joyce was a guide for doing that somehow. I was also deeply influenced by my teachers (particularly our shared teacher, Stanley Plumly and his Marriage in the Trees, which I read over and over). And, I read and re-read Carson’s Autobiography of Red and Bishop’s Complete Poems. And Plath’s Ariel. And Levis’s Elegy (“Elegy Ending in the Sound of a Skipping Rope” knocks the wind out of me every time.) And I read street signs. And newspapers (the Washington Post, theOnion, the New York Times). And the labels of works of art in the Smithsonian and the Hirshorn. And I read different pieces of music I would work through when I picked up my violin. And the little notes I wrote to myself in the sheet music to help myself through difficult passages. And I read emails. And student papers. And my student loan deferment letters… The list of texts that might have influenced me is difficult, if not impossible, to track.
Playing the violin gives me such pleasure, but it is tinged with a kind of sadness—one that I have learned to welcome. I have to forgive myself every time I pick it up for not being as good as I used to be. I liked too many things to ever really become fantastic at the violin, but I did become serious enough about it that my senior year of high school I’d skip class to get an extra hour of practice in so I could prepare for my music school auditions. I was in music school for a year, but the violin taught me lasting lessons, the most important of which is how to work: how to break something down that seems impossible into manageable pieces. How to figure out why something seems impossible and approach it like a puzzle. It has also taught me to trust myself—the muscles of the body, the thought that is too quick to become truly legible. Sometimes the most difficult things to do with an instrument seem to just happen. Writing poems can be like that. The poem arrives, and it seems like it’s not even part of yourself. But, then you have to remind yourself that it is the result of reading, writing, discipline, revision, etc.
As for composers that have influenced me, I could ramble endlessly. I like a huge range of composers and bands, and I like finding new things and going to hear live music when I can. (I got to hear Neko Case live in Chicago recently and was really excited about it!) And I like making crazy play lists that I listen to when I go running so I feel like I’m dancing. I can say, though, that I’m obsessed with Jascha Heifetz’s recording of the Tchaikovsky violin concerto (Fritz Reiner, Chicago Symphony). When I was trying to train as a violinist, I would listen to it endlessly. I can’t listen to any other recording of it. I heard Sarah Chang do it once, and the whole time I was checking it against that one version in my mind. I could ramble about Heifetz’s recording endlessly (and probably not very intelligently).
KZ: Thank you for sharing so much of your writing process and what you were reading. I think you are really on to something when you compare muscle-memory built playing a violin to the process of writing a poem; likewise, the irreducible moment of spontaneity and clarity – the act of creativity – from which a lyric poem or piece of music springs. That moment cannot be reduced.
I like your attention to the “execution” of art. Vivaldi was introduced to me as a “one hit wonder” and yet I judge every recording against an out-of-print Stuttgart Chamber Orchestra’s performance of “The Four Seasons” in which the limited orchestra draws a heightened attention and resonance to each note. Everything is audible, in contrast to a huge number of musicians that can drown out the subtleties. In that state Vivaldi becomes transcendent for me. As I experience classical music, some of it presents itself to me as myth simply because I heard the piece so often as a child (only later did I understand the instances in which the composer was evoking myth). Wagner, Mozart, Bach, Vivaldi, Beethoven, Grieg: certain pieces snap me back to an almost pre-verbal state, expressing an emotion I was not complex enough to grasp with words at the time. How were you introduced to classical music, and does it have anything to do with your attention to myth?
The craft of your book is such that, I think also, we have been talking about Philomela all this while. Her myth works as a framework, a backdrop of backdrops against which your poems riff so successfully. “Edith Wharton’s Age of Innocence by T.C. Mills” is where I would like to nest my argument here.
To start with I would like to just step back and say “wow!” On its own this poem is worth attention, and yet set against Philamela’s myth, the referent in the title directs and redirects in such an enjoyable way. Dovetailing perhaps. I read an intent need to understand and think about innocence, where it starts and ends, in both this poem and your attention to and use of Philomela’s myth. How do you experience that boundary? Could you perhaps talk about how juxtaposition helped you create this poem?
TM: When I was writing “Edith Wharton’s Age of Innocence by T.C. Mills,” I kept thinking about the opera: how in Wharton’s Age of Innocence, the opera is its own theatre of sex and desire. I kept meditating on desire and the body, identity and gender. Juxtaposition happened when I started working in couplets: how could I distill a series of images into their most vivid and visceral form in a way that still moved? As I was working on the other poems in Tongue Lyre, I was also reading Blake’s Songs of Innocence and Experience. The Philomela myth joined the poems of the book after the arc was starting to take shape. The silenced woman, the violated woman: how could I in different ways think about the relationship between the nightingale and memory, the victim and artist? The myth was meant to give form to the sequence of poems where the psyche returns to a home that is both the female body—and the will that returns us to memory.
KZ: Your poem sets up its scene, “New Years Eve in Central Park” and evolves to a moment of juxtaposition. Just the beginning and the end leaves out the entire narrative in between, and this creates an operatic tension. I focus on the moment, where, after the poem has introduced where innocence begins and ends. It breaks into repetition:
Or the age of innocence begins with my cousin
holding a green razor between her legs (4).
These lines activate about ten narratives in my brain, because the poem has established some expectations that this is a narrative. The first narrative I think of is a young girl who is about to start shaving her legs: a token of femininity. But this narrative seems too easy. The razor is stationary, held. Indecisive perhaps? Then I begin asking what kind of razor is it? There are straight razors that are green. But with all of this thinking I think I am wrong. This fascinates me because it is symbolic. Narratives cannot undo its power. It is a way of returning to safety in remembering. Narratives are, in one sense, an end to innocence if they attempt to situate a subject within a larger context. Innocence is the inability to recognize the culturally specific narrative one is situated in.
Your poem lulls me back to a moment before I could fluently read events, as a child. I remember in parts. I am convinced that the form accomplishes this, by introducing a narrative and then collapsing it. In this way, I think your poem enacts tension. Or as William Meredith writes in “About Opera,” from Partial Accounts that our words are mundane, but in opera, “they yearn to take the risk these noises take”(85).
I think “Edith Wharton’s Age of Innocence by T.C. Mills” is emblematic of the dialectic your poems explore and synthesize. On the one hand your poems in Tongue Lyrefollow closely some narrative techniques in James Joyce’s Ulysses, while on the other, your poems stake out new territory. There is a fulcrum or a balance in your work that produces a tension between narrative and narratives undone. Unfortunately my interview we must miss some of the complexity of the arc of your book, but it blends and re-appropriates personal narrative and myth; it varies in form from cohesive narratives to an erasure poem (if that is what “Ithaca” is). Another node is your understated poem, “Cleaning Out the Lyre” that was featured on Poetry Daily. You also mentioned Blake, who shows up in an epigraph for your seven page meditation, “Rose.” I find an elaborate complexity I want to dwell upon. At what point in your process did some of this congeal?
Tongue Lyre is asymmetrically bookended by Philomela. “Tongue” and “The Myth of Philomela” offer two takes on blending narrative and myth. In “Tongue” personal narrative is set ominously against myth, whereas in “The Myth of Philomela” a third-person narrative inflects the mythological. Both poems create a somewhat cohesive narrative, in counterpoint to moments where a narrative comes undone. We have spent a great deal of time considering moments of fracture in your work. And while these poems are fractured to a degree, the unity the narrative offers is powerful. What do narrative and form offer these poems, as others in your collection, from your perspective as the poet?
TM: I would like to begin my answer with your statement, “Narratives are, in one sense, an end to innocence if they attempt to situate a subject within a larger context. Innocence is the inability to recognize the culturally specific narrative one is situated in.” I am fascinated by context and citation: to a certain extent, my use of Joyce and prior myth is, at times, one of re-contextualizing a prior narrative. The poem “Ithaca” is an erasure of a passage from the “Ithaca” chapter of Ulysses:
Ever you will wander,
to the extreme limit of cometary orbit,
beyond the fixed stars and variable suns and telescopic planets,
astronomical waifs and strays,
to the extreme boundary of space (56).
One could argue that we are endlessly situated and re-situated within a larger context. A favorite passage of mine from Barthes’s S/Z comes to mind:
“The text, in its mass, is comparable to a sky, at once flat and smooth, deep, without edges and without landmarks; like the soothsayer drawing on it with the tip of his staff an imaginary rectangle wherein to consult, according to certain principles, the flight of birds, the commentator traces through the text certain zones of reading, in order to observe therein the migration of meanings, the outcropping of codes, the passage of citations” (14).
Of course, this is one very specific theoretical view of narrative; I just wanted to complicate the question about narrative a bit. I mean, from a Barthian lens, how can we ever gain perspective over one’s narrative—within such an infinite textual cosmos? But conversely, one must ask the other question. If one is to think about innocence as a lack of knowledge of the myth in which one is situated, who is the observer “reading” the narrative? Whose reading is producing the narrative and therefore concluding the framework in which a perspective is situated? In what way, then, does narrative structure itself become a kind of wingman for hegemonic values? For, one cannot ignore that narrative itself fixes language within a particular kind of arc. I suppose all of this is to say that I have a healthy skepticism about how narratives—historical, cultural—are used, and by whom. I enjoy working with myth, but myth itself is a difficult mode of language; throughout history, it has been implemented by nations in need of a hero, or in the aims of claiming land as a territory (and therefore the cultural and historical narratives of others). Myth itself is a powerful cultural force. As narrative, it is often read innocently—as something that represents what we want to see, or what values we hold (I am thinking of Bruce Lincoln here)—but at the same time, it wields its power via playing a key cultural function.
In narratives about sexual violence, often the victim is powerless: what that means is that the victim’s perspective is effaced, or even rendered unreliable. The myth of Philomela is a rape narrative. The woman in the story has her tongue cut out. And Philomela becomes a nightingale. In using this myth, I wanted to try to activate this voice—albeit via fragmentation. I suppose I was trying to overturn the narrative itself. Philomela of the original myth does end up weaving a cloth to communicate what happened to her. In a culture that silences victim’s narratives, and within a psychology of trauma where often the narrative—as in, memory—can never quite become whole, I wanted to explore an archetypal rape narrative through the masculine myth of Odysseus so that I could turn it on its head. I wanted the female psyche to find a homecoming in the body: the female body. And I wanted to use the poems to engage with memory as an act of will: one that can overturn the trope of forgetting that exists in the nightingale imagery of the myth itself (here, I am drawing from a recording of Allen Grossman’s lecture on Keats). In Tongue Lyre, perhaps the Odyssey poems themselves become this cloth. As a poet, as a person, it is difficult for me to speak more directly about this other than aesthetically. When I was writing these poems, writing them was my lifeblood. I couldn’t not write these poems.
KZ: Thank you for unpacking the complexities of your approach to narrative. I feel that sense of urgency: that your poems have to be said. While other poets have used tactics similar to your own, your poems are set apart for me as a reader by the sense of presence and urgency they convey. As you put it, that the female psyche finds, “a homecoming in the body: the female body.” I feel that sense of presence. In spite of the effaced and unreliable representations of women, in your work I find a counter-force. Often, as you note, narratives about sexual violence against women, or violence in general, silence and efface the victim. The victim’s tongue is cut out. Yet your poems navigate and activate other possibilities; narratives break apart and become multiple, or are reconstructed in a new way. The power to rearrange and remake myths is equally as powerful as the nefarious uses of myth. Well, at least I’d like to think that. Your poems find life in the ruins of one hegemonic culture, laid over today’s hegemonic structures. The image of the tongue, your tongue as the poet and the amputated tongue of Philomela, takes on a meaning of “will-to-speech.” These poems are vital. I mean they have a pulse. I mean they need to be said aloud.
In “Tinsel Halo,” the sounds of your poem are so intricately crafted. Your passage, “The tidewater / as warm as the twist / from the tap you wash your hands with” (65) is unmistakably music. It does not seem to conform to traditionally received poetic meters, however, the words have a particular cadence along with the consonance of w, t, and h. Your entire book is rich with sound, but this poem seems a superabundance. I read it as a kind of “Tinsel Halo,” a false halo of sorts. Or overly glamorous, perhaps. Or perhaps the texture of your language has to do with the meta-poetic gesture towards Picasso’s women lying naked and exposed for the male artist to appropriate. The texture of your phrases are almost cubist, in that they draw attention to the surface of the poem. We get fragmented glimpses of scenes, but the words force me to pay attention to them and how they are shaped sonically after a particular aesthetic tactic. The sounds are the surface of this poem, and I feel forced to confront it. Throughout your book, it is clear that the sounds of words are important to you. What insights can you offer about your approach to the sounds of a poem? I listen and listen continually for new words and new music between old words, but perhaps that is not true of you?
TM: Thank you for the beautiful reading of my poem, Karl. I find myself turning to Stevens’s essay, “The Noble Rider” (The Necessary Angel) in order to answer your question. Stevens writes, “above everything else, poetry is words” and that “words, above everything else, are, in poetry, sounds” (32). When I was writing “Tinsel Halo,” I was thinking about the theatricality of holiness (in painting). I was also thinking about representations of the body and even the sexuality of aesthetics. I wanted the poem to enact a different kind of lyric; I wanted to push the fragment to the limit. I thought about achieving unity through sound, but also letting sound carry me “off the subject,” so to speak. When I wrote the lines you quoted—“The tidewater / as warm as the twist / from the tap you wash your hands with”—I thought about how the body feels in water, pushed by the waves. I didn’t want to force that kind of rhythm on the poem, but I also wanted to see if the poem could enact it somehow. Stevens writes, “A poet’s words are of things that do not exist without the words” (32). In a way, “Tinsel Halo” especially functions as a kind of thing made of words, the words being the shapes (or, images) and sounds.
KZ: Tyler, thank you again for all of your poems in Tongue Lyre. I have truly enjoyed reading them and thank you also for sharing so much of your knowledge about how they were crafted. Would you share a little about what your new poems are doing, or might do?
TM: I have a difficult time talking about my work when it’s in progress…I’m revising a new manuscript right now, and it keeps growing and developing in new ways as I write more poems and revise older ones. I love this part of the writing process. Since I tend to be obsessive about revisions, it can also be pretty challenging for me to just let things go when it is time. All I can say right now is that the project deals with the themes of flight, history, document, landscape, memory, governmental violence, and art. My poems are always about art in one way or another, it seems. My new poems yearn for the “what could have been” and the mystery in what the past reluctantly gives the present: as a record of history that is also a fiction of history.
Tyler Mills is the author of Tongue Lyre (Southern Illinois University Press, 2013), which won the 2011 Crab Orchard Series in Poetry First Book Award. Her poems have received awards from the Crab Orchard Review, Gulf Coast, and Third Coast and have appeared in AGNI, Best New Poets, The Antioch Review, Georgia Review, TriQuarterly Online, and elsewhere. A graduate of the University of Maryland (MFA, poetry), Tyler Mills is currently a PhD candidate in the Program for Writers at the University of Illinois-Chicago.